Silent crit - Grid System publication feedback

' Good research.Thorough'

'Be nice to see more photocopies and overlaying'

'Like the use of acetate' 

'Aesthetic is not quite right for magazine' 

'Good explanation across a variety of grid systems' 

'Order book into grid systems so you can refer to each example you found interesting in the future' 

'Large body of work looking at all type of grids' 

'A lot of research looking at books and layouts' 

'Good layout examples, brood amount'

'Your collages are more so much more exciting than research'

'Could produce a front cover for your publication' 

'Clear layout' 

'Collages are very successful and have been taken further. Love the use of acetate' 

In order to improve the following publication on grid systems an order could be put in place. This would separate research and formed designs created by myself. A clear division between the different grid systems also could be formed within the publication so it has a clear structure and flow for the reader. In order to expand the publication digitally, more precise designs could be created following the researched grid systems giving them a detailed, clear description. A different paper stock could also be used such as cartridge paper in order for the publication to look more presentable. Finally, in order for it to be clear what the publication is about straight away a front cover needs to be created for the publication.