1st group Crit on colour publication

Given feedback... 

'visually looks well put together and the composition is strong' 

- I agree with this, however, I feel the final outcome all needs to be refined further by cutting all edges to the same size in order to create a polished finished for the publication. A figuration in order to bind the publication needs to also be founded due to using acetate. 

'Could you photograph banana next to complementary colours to see what affect this has on the hues'.

- I agree this could affect the hues and be effective, however, I wanted to keep my project on complementary colours flower related to make the sections of the publication clear.

'Complementary contrast- good explanation- justifies colour choices by referring to colour wheel'.

- I feel I need to expand my justification by saying what was successful and what was unsuccessful. 

'Contrast of saturation - theory is there but need to write in relevance to your images.'

- I agree to this statement, I should also expand my research linked to my work.

'Could justify reason for use of black in relation to yellow'.

- This is a valid point and I feel I need to explain my choice of a strong contrast done in order to create a professional, slick, flowing publication which is photographically pleasing. 

'Like the use of different paper'. 

- I feel this suited the aesthetic of the design well, making the overall research publication have a style and fit together in a professional, slick manner. 

'Impressive content and photography- used fun, unusual objects to display theories'

- Overall, I believe the publication is slick and interesting with it's simplistic, effective imagery. However, I feel this could be developed further by experimenting further with different objects and colours. I also believe photography styles could be looked at such as typology to fit all of the images together. 

'Your descriptions for each idea are clear and relate to what you've made. However, you need to add more writing to explain yourself further.'

- I believe research has to be expanded further and descriptions need to be longer to ensure a detailed, clear publication.